I would like to to share with you my first English poem, which was inspirated by the death of a pal-friend's sister which surprised me so much that i wrote these lines immediately.
I devoted this rather as a song like as a poem although.![]()
Sue's funeral
I don't understand
Why are you crying?
Beyond this point...
I am just
Longing for solitude.
I am being.
Falling down
Swimming with
Easy-legged seagulls.
Free.
New horizons...
I am on my own.
Don't worry, please,
I will never be so
Far away.
I am in every
Candlelight, in
Your every little
Movement,
Even in that early
Spring flower,
As well, that
You have just pinned
Into your hair
A moment before.
Don't accuse me.
I didn't think it
Seriously, but...
I really had to go...
Now.
Don't cry...
Let's say to you
A final and
Irrevocable
BYE.


Marta
FifiYou are a real writer! What a poem! Completely brilliant, so loaded with emotion yet using so few words. Keep writing, this is the sort of thing that really interests not only me but everyone.
Fifi
04:35 AM EST