Marta

    My poem...

    Tuesday, December 25, 2007, 03:46 AM EST [General]


    I would like to to share with you my first English poem, which was inspirated by the death of a pal-friend's sister which surprised me so much that i wrote these lines immediately.
    I devoted this rather as a song like as a poem although.




    Sue's funeral

    I don't understand
    Why are you crying?
    Beyond this point...
    I am just
    Longing for solitude.
    I am being.
    Falling down
    Swimming with
    Easy-legged seagulls.
    Free.
    New horizons...
    I am on my own.
    Don't worry, please,
    I will never be so
    Far away.
    I am in every
    Candlelight, in
    Your every little
    Movement,
    Even in that early
    Spring flower,
    As well, that
    You have just pinned
    Into your hair
    A moment before.
    Don't accuse me.
    I didn't think it
    Seriously, but...
    I really had to go...
    Now.
    Don't cry...
    Let's say to you
    A final and
    Irrevocable
    BYE.



      

    3 (1 Ratings)

    Marta

    You are a real writer! What a poem! Completely brilliant, so loaded with emotion yet using so few words. Keep writing, this is the sort of thing that really interests not only me but everyone.

    Fifi

    Fifi
    December 27, 2007
    04:35 AM EST

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